Friday, October 11, 2013

The Haunted Mansion (Adjectives, Commas in a series)

                                     Haunted Mansion

       Last Wednesday I went into the creepy old haunted mansion down the street from my apartment. The first room I entered had a zombie in it! The zombie was sluggish, stinky, and overweight. The second room I went into had a werewolf in it! She was hairy, annoying, and persnickety. The third room had a ghost in it! This ghost was gruesome, unfriendly, and childish. I was so frightened that I quickly escaped out the back door. This was the most exciting night of my life!